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I remember you
Your rich brown hair
And the way it used to fall over the pillow
The smell of it
Vanilla and honey

I remember you
Your large blue eyes
And the way you used to stare at me
The intensity of your gaze
Strong and pricing

I remember you
Your sweet voice
And the way you used to laugh
Such a wonderful sound
Joyful and carefree

I remember you
Your beautiful body
And the way it shivered every time I kissed it
Moving against my lips
Sensitive and soft

I remember you
Your gentle hands
And the way you used to run your fingers through my hair
The feel of them scraping
Delicate and nimble

I remember you
Your red lips
And the way you used to kiss me
Always hesitating
Trembling and sweet

I remember you
Your strong voice
And the way you always knew what to say
Such a quick tongue
Confident and proud

I remember you
Your true love
And the way I held you at the end
In my arms as we cried
Pained and broken

I remember you
©2009 ~Isika
:iconisika:

Author's Comments

I wrote this really quickly and I don’t much care for it. It’s another assignment from my friend. We had to write something starting with “I remember…” I just went and started all of it with I remember. It kind of based it off one of my fanfiction couples. So I had a rough idea of what he was feeling. Yes she dies in the end, kind off; but no vampire stuff. Hope you all like it, I don’t.

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:iconrogueshepherd:
very nicely done, i love your descriptions, yet again another masterpiece

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Animals please keep your humans on a leash.... :shakefist:


"One Radical Poet With a Social Collar"
:iconisika:
lol, thanks! :hug:

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"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link
:iconsketch-y:
^.^

I like your description in this one.

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"The most exciting phrase to hear in science, the one that heralds new discoveries, is not 'Eureka!' (I found it!) but 'That's funny ...'"
Isaac Asimov
:iconisika:
Thanks Love!

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"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link
:iconangel-hime-san:
I love it. It's very sweet, even if she does die in the end. They're right, your descriptions are very good here.

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U can't spell HEART without the ART!!
:iconisika:
Thanks a lot! :hug: Glad you liked it!

--
"Did you dream?"
No

"Tell me a dream?"
I rarely dream

"You're broke."

Quote from an awesome comic by Fehed Said & Shari Chankhamma called 'The Clarence Principle'! Vist their website link

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